Sunday, March 22, 2009

Challenge #22~Inspired by william carlos williams

morning arrives too soon

inspired by william carlos williams

written by: lys

so much depends
upon

a diet dr.
pepper

awakening my
mind

from the sandman's
dreams.

the red wheelbarrow

so much depends
upon

a red wheel
barrow

glazed with rain
water

beside the white
chickens

by: william carlos williams


8 comments:

  1. Love your version!!! This is one of my faves from the book Love That Dog.

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  2. Ahhhh .. love love that dog .... and love hate that cat (the sequel) and .... really enjoyed your soda poem.
    :)
    Kevin

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  3. Love the poem and I LOVE Diet Dr. Pepper!
    Perfect slice for me,
    Thanks Lynnelle
    Bonnie

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  4. Almost everyone I know is in love with Dr. Pepper, but this is my first Pepper Poem! Love it!

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  5. Completely understand!!! Coffee is my vice!

    Are you going to share it with your class?

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  6. Cathy,

    Yes, I plan on choosing that as my SOLC to share tomorrow. We are finishing up our poetry unit this week. My students have loved the books like Love That Dog and Hate That Cat. On Friday, we are reading some of our own poetry for parents. I can't wait!!

    Lynnelle

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  7. I can soooo relate to a diet dr. pepper in the morning.

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  8. Love it! My class wrote so much depends upon poems after reading Love that Dog.

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