inspired by william carlos williams
written by: lys
so much depends
upon
a diet dr.
pepper
awakening my
mind
from the sandman's
dreams.
the red wheelbarrow
so much depends
upon
a red wheel
barrow
glazed with rain
water
beside the white
chickens
by: william carlos williams
Love your version!!! This is one of my faves from the book Love That Dog.
ReplyDeleteAhhhh .. love love that dog .... and love hate that cat (the sequel) and .... really enjoyed your soda poem.
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Kevin
Love the poem and I LOVE Diet Dr. Pepper!
ReplyDeletePerfect slice for me,
Thanks Lynnelle
Bonnie
Almost everyone I know is in love with Dr. Pepper, but this is my first Pepper Poem! Love it!
ReplyDeleteCompletely understand!!! Coffee is my vice!
ReplyDeleteAre you going to share it with your class?
Cathy,
ReplyDeleteYes, I plan on choosing that as my SOLC to share tomorrow. We are finishing up our poetry unit this week. My students have loved the books like Love That Dog and Hate That Cat. On Friday, we are reading some of our own poetry for parents. I can't wait!!
Lynnelle
I can soooo relate to a diet dr. pepper in the morning.
ReplyDeleteLove it! My class wrote so much depends upon poems after reading Love that Dog.
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